Just a normal Haiku

Still not sure about these. Harder than they seem I tell ya!

silvery mistress

cold caress then turns away

always to return

 

god I need to work on these…

Author: Michael

Husband, dad,(ex)programmer, comic collector and proud Yorkshireman. I have no idea why im here or why im writing but i rather enjoy it. no great fan of punctuation;

8 thoughts on “Just a normal Haiku”

  2. Don’t second guess yourself. You are a wonderful writer… dare I say it… poet! There I said it. So… I would just work on the tags. LOL!
    Poetry for me is very personal. It is derived from personal feelings and experiences. I don’t think one can poet without having those feelings. You clearly have them, or you these wouldn’t be any good. But they are! 😉

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