I’m wondering if it’s a wee bit obtuse. We shall see.
Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday
This week the challenge was to use synonyms for HAPPY and MOROSE. I used CONTENT and DOUR.
uncontent wage slave
dour faced, shuffles through life
home to nagging wife
a new lease of life springs forth
new patio lifts spirits
https://colleenchesebro.com/2018/07/31/colleens-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-95-happy-morose-synonymsonly/
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There you go! Congratulations on the new patio! 😀
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Hmm… LOL!
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Not sure it came out right
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Lol!
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I find my gardening areas lift my spirits. Is it a partularly nice patio?
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I think I fell completely with this post I might rewrite it and explain where I was trying to go with it
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