Posted by This week i shall attempt a haiku, a tanka and a haibun.
New shiny smart watch
controlling it with my voice
Looking like a knob
Not a bad start. Now lets tanka it up shall we
New shiny smart watch
controlling it with my voice
the king of the geeks!
You know you’re not on Star Trek
Wife looking quite embarrassed
True story…
How about we go full haibun. Well as best as I can muster. Still working on this element. Poem, Prose, Poem for this one.
New shiny smart watch
controlling it with his voice
the king of the geeks!
You know you’re not on Star Trek
Wife looking quite embarrassed
But proud he stands, connected. One with his devices. He is man and he is confident – legs akimbo with hands on hips waiting patiently for her to emerge from the changing rooms and to see him with renewed eyes. He feels taller, chin up, eyes bright as lesser men scurry laden with bags disconnected and alone. But not he, not today. Today is his day, and tonight he will delight her because he is connected and he feels alive.
Candles, wine, music
Children fast asleep in bed
warm breath on her neck
“Bloody hell you’re scratching me,
now you’ve laddered my stockings!”
Well I guess its something…sorry Japan
Here you go …something different.
photo courtesy of Thorr_deichmann at pixabay
Absolutely excellent! Your humor shines bright in your words. I love it. Now, your Haibun is quite spectacular. ❤
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Thanks Colleen 🙂 so glad u enjoyed it. i
tried one about silver birch and the passing of time and the inevitable shortening of our days but it made me feel a little odd 🙂
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LOL! That’s great, Michael. I’m glad you went with what was in your heart! 😀
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The ending sounds about right! Too funny! Lol… 🙂
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Mines on the shelf looking at me as I sit and type and I feel it’s desperate to be worn but I just cannot…
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Ha ha… be careful Michael… the one my friend’s got, actually recorded and texted to me, a bit of her conversation which she was having with someone else. Thankfully it wasn’t too graphic! Lol… 😂
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oh good lord!
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Yes! Her and I were both surprised as I was sitting in just the other room. She has vowed since to never wear it to bed! Lol…
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hmmm…I might use that as an idea for something im writing for this weeked if thats ok…
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I think it would be terribly funny. Go for it! 😉
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