Haiku Challenge – Hope and Stay

Let’s start with a haiku or two shall shall we.  The rules do let me play with synonyms which I might explore too.

In my heart you’ll stay

you drift into the darkness

hope of afterlife


seems a bit serious..

walked her home tonight

Invited in for coffee

hope she lets me stay


another maybe


husband caught, hope lost

empty promises to change

if you let him stay


All very serious…maybe a Tanka

See Maurice eating

watch him gorge on cheese in bed

eats cake in the night

Where can he get new trousers

ones with the elastic waist


Hmmm….not really feeling it. 


These ones we kind of funny if you fancy more