Colleen’s Poetry – Challenge: Mist & Shape

Small Japanese poem GO GO GO!

Thanks to Colleen It’s that time again.  Small Japanese poem GO GO GO!

First up a 3/5/3

Lost in mist

unfamiliar shapes

boat shipwrecked

Now the traditional haiku

Cold mist rolling in

Reality obscured

vague shapes in the dark


Twisted eerie shapes

cold Mist enveloped spectres

heart racing in chest

Tanka with different spelling and meaning because why not?

Dirty ex girlfriend

I missed your shape when you left

and the way you moved

But you spent all my money

I think hookers are cheaper

I did a few serious ones before that…you know I cant be serious for long.


Okay, my first Cinquain now.  Sorry.


Orange tosspot

Bumbling, hating, grabbing

spewing filthy oral garbage





The girl in the rain 

An open letter from the killer clown community

Photo courtesy of carloyuen@pixabay








Author: Michael

Husband, dad,programmer, comic collector and proud Yorkshireman. I have no idea why im here or why im writing but i rather enjoy it. no great fan of punctuation;

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