Though once you shone so very bright
and blinded me with all you were,
and could and, god, so should have been.
When time and life had took its toll
and each decision, each wrong turn,
had lead us to this desperate end.
I see you lying, turned to dust,
and all you shone on dead and cold
and turn my back and walk away
In search of sun and light once more.
An epic farewell. It’s a…. grim, little nifty piece of a poem you got there Michael. Have I said I love your stuff, these longer poems and stories? Yeah, you rock.
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cool, I felt like I just watched a movie. Now the thing I can’t decide is did I watch a thriller or a drama. Either way the focus is on the characters.
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Thanks man much appreciated!
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You welcome. 😀
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Very nicely done Michael!
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Cherrs u 🙂
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