When old and grey still close I keep
those memories dear to my heart
and ‘fore I walk to final sleep
and lonely paths to then depart
A final time I will relive and tender recollect
each smile you gifted though I often sadly did neglect
your light by which I found my way and through the dark did chart.
Love generous and without cost
so freely gave and not repaid
and eager how I ate my fill
as sunset sank beyond that hill
were dreams way back were made.
And so at last, though late I know
you lie as pale and cold as snow
and how I wish I had the time
of days were you were always mine
That’s very touching Michael.
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Yes! Mhmm…
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OMG fud you take that pic? It’s lovely!
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Crap! *Did
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Lol
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I did yes up on rishworth moor
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love these, the rhythm and the wistful aching for a gift realized once it was gone. Lovely photo.
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Wonderful poem… that picture is breath taking!
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Thanks. Was up on rishworth moor as I recall
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thanks. its the rhythm I think I enjoy most with poetry. making it just work as you read it. trying to make it flow and seem so natural
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you have a talent for it too. it’s refreshing and rebellious in its own way because so much of modern poetry is nonrhyming unless it’s song. Don’t get me wrong. I love poetry that doesn’t rhyme — because I write it, lol.
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Your welcome.
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Thanks. I try to not overthink it to be honest. A good rhyme still has it’s place for sure…
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