At days end when time flies and sun sits low
In crimson skies and blood red stained gives way to black
He thinks of her and years of love come flooding in
From loves first flush to darker days
But always light with golden rays and hope and joy
Illuminate and feeding, green shoots blossom bright
And smiling, eyes closed he embraces
Each vision clear as days gone by and into nothing slow he slips
a burning sun quenched in swirling seas of time
Wow! Definitely “breathe sigh” worthy! Nicely done bro!
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OMG… just noticed the tags for this… I didn’t feel that at all. Hmmm…
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Thank you kindly MG
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I need to change them I didn’t feel it either lol
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LMAO!!! Fantastic! Laughing so hard right now!
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Yeah… these tags are total feels for this piece. (*throws head back – laughs… clears throat… gets serious again ’cause this piece is really good*)
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I tweaked them a little I had to read it again because I couldn’t really remember writing it sometimes I just threw a whole bunch of words down and think oh yeah that looks a bit like a poem
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LOL!! Brilliant!
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Me likey 🙂
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Nicely done ☺
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Beautiful!
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Very nicely written Michael!
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Thanks Leigha
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