Teary eyed she stands in the rain
Asks “Daddy why did she die”
He father holds her hand and says
“sometime we don’t know why.”
Dear love, best friend so loyal and true
She remembers, heart forlorn
The moments shared, the life the love
So cruelly from life torn
“It seems so sad, she was so young”
As tears mix with the rain
“do doggies go to heaven dad?
Will I see her again?”

Well, that one hit me hard. Well done, my friend.
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Beautiful ☺❤
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Beautiful…
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💓
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Thank you I was just trying to balance out the one about the man whose bottom collapsed
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Sorry I did think of you when I wrote it and remembered some of those deep emotions you were feeling and probably still are
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Oh my, that was quite a bit messy, wasn’t it! This really is a beautiful piece.
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I do find the amount of stuff quite interesting and whilst the emotions are not always my own they are genuine and one’s I have witnessed and sometimes simply on here on WordPress
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Don’t be sorry, it’s perfect.
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We find inspirations everywhere. I do very much like this side of you. But don’t give up the raunchy lol
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It’s just a little bit of balance there are only so many words that rhyme with penis scrotum syphilis and AIDS and sometimes you just have to take a break from it lol
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Very nice – I’m misting up for pets lost … there will be no more pets in my life. As a person who has no family, the loss of a beloved pet is devastating. I told you about Buddy my canary when you wrote the post about the man with the space rock and his pet canary who watched him die. This was beautiful, and really tore me up.
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We have cats with the boys love very much and we used to have a hamster and it disappeared and I’m still not allowed to mention it as it upsets them
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Pets are good for children. My neighbor had a hamster that disappeared in the house. She never did find it and she could not give a valid explanation to the grandchildren what happened to it. I think they watch too much T.V. – they wanted her to produce a body when she told them it had died.
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Lol mine were very similar
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