Dewey eyed and quite upset
The tears they run his cheeks quite wet
Hands over ears tries to forget
And block out all the noise
That’s all I am writing. I do occasionally dabble in things that might be considered a little deeper but to be honest I don’t really have the experience or the emotional depth to pull it off. Oh I can fake it but that’s not the same is it.
I can listen to a song and transform the sentiment into my own words or the emotions into something different but those feelings are not mine. I can pick a topic and attempt to wax lyrical but I find myself rolling my eyes at myself.
I haven’t had a particularly difficult life and feel very lucky and I often see so many wonderful emotive pieces and get quite envious but then I remember that there are real people and real emotions behind much of what I read and before I know it I am writing about a man from Ceylon who had a pendulous dong instead.
I suppose I could write about the angst of not being able to find my remote control or perhaps write a sonnet about the challenges of having the most untidy garden on the street.
Ooh what about something in iambic pentameter about the challenges of being a white middle class male.
As great as it would be to be able to convey such emotional intensity I realise that I am quite lucky to not necessarily have those things to write about. I realise that when the revolution I will likely be first against the wall. But hey, finding a couple of words to rhyme with gonorrhoea is something right!
Truth be told, I don’t exactly have much to fuss about…I have a solid job, a life that’s largely devoid of anything resembling struggle, don’t suffer from depression, OCD, or any other mental woes…
I do, however, fixate terribly…
As I alluded to in a previous poem, I can turn a grain of sand into a dessert…so I can take one sad tear from a decade ago and turn it into a poetry manifesto… 🙃
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And Man you do it’s so well !god imagine if something serious happened
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Something serious hits and WP is gonna be drowning in my crocodile tears… 😱
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You’re killin me Smalls
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Sometimes spewing emotional depth can drag all the energy from your body. Maybe that’s why you don’t like going there. I think you have it inside you, I’ve seen it before, and I think everyone has it inside them. But sometimes writing about it comes with a cost. I often find myself so emotionally drained if I write too many things with deep emotional meaning. Your writing is always good either way. 😉
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I guess one must have had to suffer in order to be able to express truly deep and genuine emotions. Like you, I have led a relatively good, middle class life without an over abundance of pain and trauma. That’s my excuse, anyway, for being as shallow as I am.
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Oh lordy lol
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It Just always comes out a little gloomy u know…
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That’s that’s what I need to do so refreshing admission of being shallow and a little vacuous
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You did well writing of the angst of losing your razor during home reconstruction …
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And gloomy is unfortunately part of life.
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You know… I don’t always feel the stuff I write. It just feels right or I’m inspired. My focus at times is on my reader. I want to move people. Maybe inspire them.
Don’t think you have to stray far from Michael Afterwards to write something poignant.
I’m alright most of the time. I just like the feeling of a broken heart or thought every now and again. 😉
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I recently did an audit on my comic collection and have quite a few missing somehow so trust me there is some real angst on the way
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I might try that at some point maybe I just need an inspiration or something to looking too. A broken heart is always great for some deep shit I bet
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You just finished writing something beautifully deep my dear! Lol!
You’ve got the heart. You need only tap into it. 😝
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Lol don’t tell anyone
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Too late. The secret is out!😉
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Maybe look where you found the razor … it was an unlikely spot … wasn’t it in shoe pockets on the back of a door? I lose things because there is too much clutter in this house and I need to deal with it – maybe during the Winter.
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Lol it was yes. I’m.decluttering big time so they will turn up
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I think you do quite well in all that you write. But then I struggle with limericks and feel my humorous things sound forced. It takes all kinds of writers with their own specialties.
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Probably other stuff as well!
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That it most certainly does!
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