Another month of M’s writing prompts lies ahead. I did them all in December but was less successful in January. Let’s see how we do in February shall we. This was an odd piece for me, a kind of stream on consciousness. I was sat on a really boring conference call about BIG DATA and just started typing words and this is what came out. It is not really anything to me and has little meaning and is really just a series of ideas and images thrown together like a big bowl of wordy vomit.
She rages, face twisted screaming into the wind
Her words drowned out by the crashing shore
Soaked through with the spray of the ocean’s wrath
Fists clenched her heart black like the swirling skies above
She curses his name and dies once more at the memories
Eyes wide, nostrils flared bloody teeth flashed in defiance to the raging storm
As winds rip and tear, hands raised to the heavens she bellows, gut spilling over
Her tears mixed with the dark waters swirling around her feet
Her mouth filled with vile truths and swallowed words long unspoken
And with her last utterance, winds drop and bow to her rage
Tides calm and retreat, subdued and obedient
She dies a final time and in golden robes rests in light
I liked it! You’re a mystery my dear.
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Thanks…:). I just like trying different things and seeing whether I take to any of them thank you
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Think you took to this excellently
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Very powerful.
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cool! Very fierce. I pictured a sea demi-goddess who had lived centuries and was surprised and furious to find she was not immortal after all, merely long-lived.
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Ooh nice i like that !
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Quite impressive “wordy vomit”
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Spewed forth in a torrent of a,e,i,o,u
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