Okay so I piss about a bit with my blog I realise. If my poems had a ‘Eeeeuuuwww button’ then I am pretty sure it would get pressed more than my likes. I was challenged by Roda – I think that’s what happened – to try a happy ending or two so for this week I will have a crack at a few more pleasant subjects.
At Days close he waits content
to say goodbye and drift to night
and in those moments years rolled back
warm smiles and joy and eyes shine bright
Her warm embrace and tender kiss
and babies cries and laughter sweet
when blankets laid across his knees
worn eyes do close and visions greet
First words, first steps, first dates first kiss
long days dark nights but then
he sees her face and hears her voice
and love’s restored again
And as he slips to dark and rest
a life well lived he sees
of family, love and heart and hearth
life passing like the breeze
And in that moment vivid, clear
old lips whisper and say
each day a treasure I received
farewell, on this last day
I knew you could do it! Bravo!!
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I have about 20 ive scribbled bits of…its rodas fault really
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She has a way about her โบ
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That’s beautiful – bravo!
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I liked it! It was heart warming.
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Thanks Linda ill be doing a few of these this week
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Thanks ๐
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It is lovely but I have to wonder just how painful errr difficult errr odd errr different it was for you to write about such heartwarming things. There really should be a strike-through option for comments…
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Lol..should keep them a secret really n not tell anyone ๐
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I’ll look forward to them – I got behind in Reader over the weekend … finally a little nice weather here in SE Michigan and I escaped to the Park for two nice long walks and picture-taking expeditions. Now three days of rain, but at least it is not snow thankfully. We’ve had a brutal Winter.
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And not yet over ill bet! Still time for more snow
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This!!! Is wonderful! Adding it to my favorites page! ๐
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thanks indeed …im persisting with my grown up themes this week
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I quite like them, nice to venture into uncharted territory now and again ๐
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A wee dabble here n there ๐
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One of your best! ๐
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Wonderfully written!
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Thanks Leigha. A bit different i guess
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Thanks m ๐
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