Ronovan’s Haiku Challenge: Smooth & Hand

After a couple of days off I think I will just ease back into things with some silly Japanese poetry thingies.

I have learned over time that these are more senryu than haiku, but hey-ho they’re mostly the right syllable count, which is something I guess.   

 

Ron’s haiku challenge

Use ‘Smooth’ and ‘Hand’.  I snigger.

So bloody childish.

 

Smooth silken bonds, tight

Powerless, cedes upper hand

Safe-words: ‘It’s too big!”

 

Smooth hands tell a tale

Soft as a babies bottom

The world’s worse builder

 

Think that’ll do don’t you…

Author: Michael

Husband, dad,(ex)programmer, comic collector and proud Yorkshireman. I have no idea why im here or why im writing but i rather enjoy it. no great fan of punctuation;

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