Courtesy of Colleen Chesebo, another weekly Haiku Challenge. It is the 52nd weekly anniversary, so I’m going to have a crack at the haiku, the Tanka and the Haibun. Congrats Colleen!
Haiku
Moved by the spirit
Preacher shouts loudly in tongues
Joy makes us donate
Let’s build on that with a Tanka
Moved by the spirit
Preacher shouts loudly in tongues
thrashes on church floor
he having a seizure? No?
apparently that’s god’s joy
Haibun. I think this is how they go based on what I have read. They can vary.
As I watched him lowered into the ground I remembered the things I no longer have and am for that I am grateful. At peace, I remembered and was thankful for those who’s beliefs and behaviour has guided me and helped me find my own path. As I say goodbye Late spring sun shines dappled through the trees and the distant laughter of children at play serves to remind me of what matters most.
Returned to the earth
A life so well lived and loved
memories abound
A breeze promises rain and as I walk away I am content knowing that there were few regrets and the echoes of life will ring on until they are no more and replaced by those influenced by what has gone before but has been forgotten.
Light fades at days end
Sleep and pass into darkness
a job so well done
See, I can kind of do serious 🙂
Something different?
Pic courtesy of Pixabay.
Yes you can. 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Excellent! WELL DONE! I love the Haibun. The poetry is connected but a total extension of your prose. I think that’s how to do it! ❤
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Yay thanks…I think I kinda get them now. Just about.
They’re no dirty limerick but fun nonetheless 🙂
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LOL! I don’t know, I think some of our poems are pub-worthy! LOL! 😀
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Just when I thought I knew what to expect of your writing you go and do something new. Love these!
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Wouldn’t want to be too predictable right 🙂
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Very nice. Think I’m going to like it here.
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